idk if its one of the samples u used or a mixing problem but it sounds distorted sometimes :(
great entry apart from that

hmmm, I'm not sure I hear that tbh ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

ahh I can hear it in one place now, I think I know what is wrong

I really like this entry, the instrument choices and light echo-y mix help give it the peaceful feeling you were going for. -w-

Only nitpick is that the percussion line with the triangle toms from 0:31-0:52 doesn't fit all that much, maybe it could have remained the same before it transitions into the next section (which is my favorite part, by the way :3)

nitpicks are unneccessary tbh.... it's too late for me to change it

its not too late to learn from feedback for your next composition tho

but he specifically suggested something to change in this song

Really really liked this. Gave me some Marble Garden Zone-esque vibes. Fantastic.

glad you like it :3

I love this! It's so atmospheric, and just really pleasant.

thank you uwu