My Garden
 
  May 9th 2025 7:00am
 
 
Finished another oldie! This one began life back in 2023. It's a bit nostalgic coming back to it and recording vocals for lines I wrote two years ago at this point, whew!!! Biggest challenge of this track was working up the courage to put as many vocals down on the track as I ended up doing. Also dealing with the fact that, wow, this is WAY out of my range lmao, but hey i thought it came out alright. Learned a lot about what i can do with my voice while figuring this all out.. huge learning experience, cant wait to do more vocal stuff moving forward!!

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Wild and entangled
Cross-signal flashes under canopies
Enshrined in mahogany
In long summers
Planting the aspen’s seed

Rose thorns in winter’s end
Can’t grow or pretend
That they’re here to stay

Walk in my garden
Walk in my garden with me dear
And this will be where
my story ends and yours begins

Put me to sleep tonight
Dreaming pollen white
And wake me up at dawn

Apples, petals and honey
So come and take a bite
Take from my garden
Take from my garden

Rose thorns in winter’s end
Cannot grow or pretend
That they’re here to stay

Walk in my garden
Walk in my garden with me dear
Shedding flowers for no one
An angel standing, when I looked I thought I saw a tear
The winds are howling in Babylon
Take from my garden, whenever winter nears

Wild and entangled
Cross-signal flashes under canopies
Enshrined in mahogany
In long summers
Planting the aspen’s seed
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216874
Level 23 Mixist
SnugglyBun
 
 
 
post #216874 :: 2025.05.10 1:07am
holy shit this is beautiful
 
 
216979
Level 31 Chipist
damifortune
 
 
 
post #216979 :: 2025.05.11 9:08am
woah! the way this develops in the middle is really stunning! great work
 
 
217150
Level 24 Chipist
nicole
 
 
 
post #217150 :: 2025.05.12 10:59pm
whoaaaaaaa this is so cool, i love the bass performance, really good! and the string arrangement is so expressive, i love when it gets soooo intense. also i loveeee the vocal performance and the lyrics!
 
 
217207
Level 26 Mixist
Vav
 
 
 
post #217207 :: 2025.05.13 11:13am
  
  damifortune liēkd this
composition is really good, i think i would have liked to hear the vocals as more of an up-front presence in the mix, your lyrics are voice are good
 
 

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