cute first entry!

giving some overall shape/direction to your melodic parts will go a long way towards making your tune a little more focused, but i do appreciate the scattered-ness especially in the rhythm. the pauses are nice

Thanks damifortune, I'm still testing beepbox and probably I'll do something more complex

sounds like a cool first entry. is this your overall first musical piece or are you just not familiar with beepbox/overall computer generated sound?

thanks n3david, i'm familiar with famitracker and protracker but i did it on beepbox cuz i want to learn more how to use it, and this is not my first song on beepbox my first actually is fmlish

That noise channel is all over the place haha. I think now that you can generate sounds, you should try making a more thematic sounding tune rather such a random cacophony. I think if you actually try implementing some traditional structure, this might actually go somewhere!

i'll get better the next time i make a new song I'm still testing things according to time I might improve, more thanks for the critique th4 d34D.