kleeder
Level 32 Chipist
 
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1st/11

 
Uncommonality 
3rd Σ5.744

 
Preciousness 
3rd Σ5.942

 
Iniminitible 
6th Σ5.693

 
Masochism 
10th Σ5.803

 
Rarity in Pants 
1st Σ6.296

 
Geflüsterte Gedanken
 
  3rd/128   Σ29.478   Nov 26th 2023 5:28am
 
 
Stell dir vor, du existierst nach deinem Tod als körperloser Geist weiter und bemerkst dann, dass du mit der Welt um dich herum noch immer interagieren kannst.
Du kannst in anderer Leute Körper springen und Besitz von ihnen ergreifen - oder mit ihnen reden.
Aber deine Kraft ist nicht unbegrenzt. Du merkst, dass du schwächer wirst, wenn du dir keinen Menschen suchst, bei dem du dauerhaft bleiben kannst.
Was würdest du tun? Wie würdest du handeln?

"Geflüsterte Gedanken" zeigt auf, welche Potentiale und Konflikte aus einer solchen Situation heraus entstehen können. Und es zeigt, dass es nie zu spät ist, sein Leben selbst in die Hand zu nehmen und das zu tun, was einen voranbringt.


DISCLAIMER: Anyone feel free to use DeepL to translate this. I didn't test it, so there will most likely be some mistakes. But it should be alright. Please do not use Google Translate or similar. Logical errors are the result of translation issues.

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179663
Level 19 Criticist
Kaytse
 
 
 
post #179663 :: 2023.11.27 7:48am
  
  TrippleP and kleeder liēkd this
Should've been 56 pages, but at least the final chapter starts at page 56.
Will read it later when i got more time on my hands.
 
 
179667
Level 21 Chipist
tfx
 
 
 
post #179667 :: 2023.11.27 11:00am
help
 
 
180158
Level 28 Chipist
gotoandplay
 
 
 
post #180158 :: 2023.12.04 3:04pm
i will skip this for voting unless a deepl translated render appears, signing up myself carries too much risk unfortunately
 
 
180242
Level 27 Chipist
TrippleP
 
 
 
post #180242 :: 2023.12.05 1:15pm
  
  cabbage drop and kleeder liēkd this
Ich bin so be/geist/ert!!
Dies ist erste Buch was ich seit langem gelesen habe, und es hat mich verschlungen. Am liebsten möchte ich mehr davon!

This is the first book I've read in a while, and it really blowed me away how I was pulled into the story. I really recommend you to read it! Do yourself a favor and translate it, even if there might be some mistakes in translation, the main point should stick out. The topic of this story is so interesting and I love where it goes. I don't want to spoil anything, so just. Read it. Do it. Doesn't take too long. Time flies reading this. I almost missed my bus stop reading this book.

appproved
 
 
180255
Level 29 Mixist
mirageofher
 
 
 
post #180255 :: 2023.12.05 8:59pm
  
  cabbage drop, TrippleP and kleeder liēkd this
he almost missed his buch-haltestelle
 
 
180296
Level 23 Mixist
SnugglyBun
 
 
 
post #180296 :: 2023.12.06 2:21pm
  
  cabbage drop, mirageofher, TrippleP and kleeder liēkd this
i had to translate this by chunks on deepl to understand it, but as i did that i found myself a really amazing, beautiful and emotional novel.
just please make an english translaton sooner or later
 
 
180327
Level 9 Chipist
notocord
 
 
post #180327 :: 2023.12.07 2:44am
  
  cabbage drop and kleeder liēkd this
This is the *Gud* stuff
 
 
180622
Level 30 Chipist
funute
 
 
 
post #180622 :: 2023.12.10 1:28am
  
  SnugglyBun, Lint_Huffer, cabbage drop, gotoandplay, Lasertooth, mirageofher, damifortune and kleeder liēkd this
Good news! I worked with kleeder to come up with an English translated version of this entry: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1QPHb_eXC-dUQRykTKjmBaXy7v497NMXT/view?usp=drive_link

Most of the translation is done by DeepL as kleeder suggested but we both bounced proofreading ideas off each other to bring you the best translation we can!

Now y'all have less of an excuse to skip this entry! Great story, by the way :)
 
 
180773
Level 28 Chipist
gotoandplay
 
 
 
post #180773 :: 2023.12.11 1:44pm
thanks funute
 
 
180774
Level 28 Chipist
gotoandplay
 
 
 
post #180774 :: 2023.12.11 1:50pm
  
  kleeder liēkd this
on the novel, i would say it got better as it progressed, as it drew more into a narrative. the first part was a little bit like reading the rules of a board game - dry but necessary to understand the rules of engagement - but I would encourage trying to weave the initial concepts more into a story and at broader intervals so that as a reader you are rewarded by the next tidbit of exposure to the "rules" of his powers and excited for what next piece of information you get about it. kind of like a "oh wow it works like this?!" moment. i hope that makes sense.
 
 
180797
Level 32 Chipist
kleeder
 
 
 
post #180797 :: 2023.12.11 9:02pm
you never fail to give good feedback, gtap. not even for writing stuff!
 
 
181106
Level 28 Chipist
gotoandplay
 
 
 
post #181106 :: 2023.12.18 1:42am
  
  kleeder liēkd this
Goethe would be proud of bronze
 
 
181108
Level 32 Chipist
kleeder
 
 
 
post #181108 :: 2023.12.18 5:59am
so am I :3
 
 

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