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one thing i think you've got a keen ear for is groovy basslines. especially the kinda off-kilter ones that do some wandering but still have you bobbing your head side to side. the one about halfway through on the triangle is awesome
i think there could stand to be some contrasting amount of structure in the melodies and supporting bits, which i'd over-generally say have less ability to wander and still feel cogent. phrasing with intent would go a long way! the melody that appears at the very end is an example of it done well because each bar has the same clear rhythm but the intervals are different and descend in one direction
i think there could stand to be some contrasting amount of structure in the melodies and supporting bits, which i'd over-generally say have less ability to wander and still feel cogent. phrasing with intent would go a long way! the melody that appears at the very end is an example of it done well because each bar has the same clear rhythm but the intervals are different and descend in one direction