This composition has magical properties that makes me listen to it with a smile all along; congratulations for pulling this amazing piece out, Spring!

volume levels are weird at some parts, the attack on the fm bass is especially confusing to me... idk

What's so wierd about it lol? Using the same static volume level all the time would have been pretty unorganic I'd think

sure, variation is appreciated, but it changes in weird ways. not really fitting the beat or mood of the song imo, like someone is turning the volume level up and down randomly.

what do you think would fit better then?

not entirely sure, but using less big jumps between volume levels might be a good start.
it feels like you were applying random volume variations, so it gets really hard for me to focus on the composition and the atmosphere

i mean, there are jumps from v42 to v62 back to v39 back to v56.
changing this to v54,v62,v52,v56 for example sounds less irritating (imo).

i also dont really like the fm bass/string sample. the sound of it feels to harsh and anggressive for a chill composition like this one, though thats completely subjective and someone else might think it fits very well

Well, now you make me curious about whether those changes would actually make the song any better, too bad it's kinda too late to change the upload if that is the case ^^
Guess I should have used that discord wips forum or something x3 but people rarely comment anything as useful there.
Thanks for your feedback though uwu

sweet :)

thanks x3