83284
Level 22 Chipist
RazerBlue6
post #83284 ::
2017.05.01 1:35am :: edit 2017.05.01 8:47am
MiDoRi, mk7, growley and TheOfficialLobst liēkd this
MiDoRi, mk7, growley and TheOfficialLobst liēkd this
I'm a slightly below high level pianist myself (don't mean to brag sorry lol), but if you need some handy tips to make it a bit more interesting for the next time:
• Try to have a bit of a dynamic tempo instead of a static one
• Try to put in small metric accents
• More dynamics lol, sorry to say but it sounds really static with the velocities
• Right hand (melody here) should be louder than the accomp (left hand)
And perhaps if you want to make the compo a bit more interesting, you could use some tritone substitutes here and there
For the rest lovely little song! Would love to make a nice jazz song with ya sometime, I smell creativity :P
• Try to have a bit of a dynamic tempo instead of a static one
• Try to put in small metric accents
• More dynamics lol, sorry to say but it sounds really static with the velocities
• Right hand (melody here) should be louder than the accomp (left hand)
And perhaps if you want to make the compo a bit more interesting, you could use some tritone substitutes here and there
For the rest lovely little song! Would love to make a nice jazz song with ya sometime, I smell creativity :P