I appreciate your lengthy and thoughtful reply!
[The kick and snare] bury the chords in the mix and shout over your melody.
I can see that. I wanted punchy percussion, so I took the easy route and shortened the envelope and increased the volume, overpowering the rest. Next time I can try shaping the percussion with better detail or doing mixing stuff with modulation channels.
I think it's most present at 0:33 (measure 20).
Yeah, I think I hear a little pumping that sounds like the limiter kicking in during percussion hits.
I don’t know exactly what the red means but I know it’s bad.
I will counter and say red is not necessarily bad. The benefits I get from clipping are loudness, compression and peak reduction. Going back to my first point: I could spend more time tinkering to shape my percussion at the instrument level, but instead I use clipping to approximate that to get closer to the sound I want. I agree that the ideal mix will not clip, but I don't have that level of mixpertise.
If you reset the limiter settings and reduce the gain until there’s no more red, I think the mix has a lot more body and is no longer dominated by the percussion.
I prefer the sound of my compressed, clipped mix to the gain-reduced version with full dynamic range. I feel that it's a matter of taste. Maybe this was all a roundabout way of me saying I'm a complete idiot with no taste, but that's where I'm at right now.
Nonetheless, this has been a dynamic conversation about volume with some good feedback. I think I've signaled to you just how distorted my views are. However, there's a lot to gain from sampling each other's input and we could even reverse polarity. Together, we can amplify our mix of knowledge. Eventually we might end up on the same wavelength. I could go on, but to compress this message I'll clip it here.