ahhh! wow this was really good but somewhere a little past halfway in I was really hoping it would pick up! It almost seems like the whole song is the intro to something that could be amazing. A good start to the format but it could use a little work (^:

i like the chord progression!

Thank you both! Yeah, I realize now that I was a bit misleading with the drum beat around the middle (and a bit repetitive throughout)... I think I kind of panicked because I liked what I started out with, but since I have lots of school work this week I was worried about finishing at all. Now I realize that I had more time than I thought, and that I probably should have built it up a bit more.

this is lovely, but i agree with savestate
and with golgi too