i like the atmosphere. bass is missing imo, could also reduce the emptyness, maybe

maybe, well I was not too sure about what sort of bass to use x3

like kleeder said, i think this could've been really ominous sounding with some bass, maybe something in the very low range of an organ? i know i'm late but if you ever wanna revisit this, that'd be my suggestion!

a good suggestion too ^^

Yeah, i agree with the above as well, this desperately calls for some kind of subbass, especially long, sustained notes, that aren't too loud, not to overpower it, but to enhance the atmosphere and fill the frequency spectrum better. The general idea and mood is interesting enough to warrant working on this more imo

hmm, reverb? i think you meant C O M P R E S S I O N

I like it, it's sinister but also tricky.