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this is a cool tune... although i think it could use some mixing work, i'm definitely still picking up what you're putting down!
(since you asked for feedback,) the phaser/flanger in the earlier section has some pretty grating, overly loud high frequencies that could be EQ'd to comfort level. everything else sounds comparably flatter and could use brightening up... using compressors on some of this stuff, especially the drums and the bass, would give it much more body and beef it up. (maybe even some light distortion on the bass line) with the exception of :45-1:06, the last section before the loop, the drums also feel too quiet for this style, it should be in your face and getting sweaty!
keep practicing and i'm sure you'll get things to sound better and better : )
(since you asked for feedback,) the phaser/flanger in the earlier section has some pretty grating, overly loud high frequencies that could be EQ'd to comfort level. everything else sounds comparably flatter and could use brightening up... using compressors on some of this stuff, especially the drums and the bass, would give it much more body and beef it up. (maybe even some light distortion on the bass line) with the exception of :45-1:06, the last section before the loop, the drums also feel too quiet for this style, it should be in your face and getting sweaty!
keep practicing and i'm sure you'll get things to sound better and better : )
