aw the mix is obstructing me. it is nice otherwise

could you clarify what you mean by that? what are you being obstructed from? hearing all the parts with more clarity?
edit: it's been like a week since i've listened to this lol i think i might have turned the vocals up too loud oops oh well hindsight is always 20/20

sorry, that was a pretty impressionist writing on my part. i meant that i want to enjoy the song but the mix is a barrier to that. i don't know what useful feedback i can give, though.

Super well done composition! All of the counter melodies really compliment each other well. It felt like you were going for a slightly lofi mix, although I think this would be great with a slight bit more power in the track. Either way, you have this style pretty nailed.

i've actually been listening to this a bunch in spite of my initial misgivings. good job imo thanks for making this