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another thought die
 
  May 23rd 2025 6:44am
 
 
i dont know
just thought it would be nice to try this out

i did not play the cicadas
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217710
Level 28 Chipist
gotoandplay
 
 
 
post #217710 :: 2025.05.23 6:46am
  
  damifortune liēkd this
does it mean you'll be happy
doesn't mean we should try
(try to find a lie)

what we wish for is slipping
down the road, kicked on by
(goodbye)

lie awake but still dreaming
can't say what it was like
(dare to even try)

kill the circular hurting
let another thought die
(let it be tonight)
 
 
217714
Level 31 Chipist
damifortune
 
 
 
post #217714 :: 2025.05.23 9:14am
  
  gotoandplay liēkd this
I love what you brought to this format with your harmonic and melodic senses; like it very much translates that this is your music in another format. it's introspective in a way that feels a bit more seasoned than a lot of singer-songwritery folks will manage

really cool, I hope you find the time and space to write more like this in the future
 
 
217740
Level 28 Chipist
gotoandplay
 
 
 
post #217740 :: 2025.05.23 4:15pm
thanks dami
 
 

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